couldnt believe what i got into
thinking that trusting you
was something i should continue,
without it breaking an inch
now without leaving a tear unshed
i lay across my bed
hoping only for my pain to end
but then you popped into my head.
i thought by not seeing you
whats the worst thing you could do
so i try to forget the pain you put me through
and the hope and love too
suddenly a feeling of warmth
rushes over me
not wanting to breath,it begins to cool
suddenly my world goes black and cold
leaving all my thoughts of you behind...
i drift away from all man kind
1 comment:
This is an amazing poem. It perfectly pushes the pain to the me, and makes you feel how the girl is feeling. The wording and structure are all very well done. It is just a very relatable poem.
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