11.25.2008

no more, i heard

no more tears,
no more lies.
no more pain,
no more whys?

i heard "i love you"
i heard "forever and always"
i heard everything,
i thought would comfort me

no more i heard,
no more i thought,
no more,
did i love

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Taylor, I like the repetitive rhythm in this poem. The effect really coordinates well with the meaning.

Mrs. Rubino